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| No titles at the beginning of the titles and the shots are a bit slow and need speeding up |
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| There are a few gaps in shots and jumps more transitions and fade ins outs need to be added. |
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| The same for this scene there are few jumps and it doesn't flow as freely as it should making it look a bit jumpy. However some of the jumpy shots do add affect to the scene of mystery and uncertainty |
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