Evaluation of rough cut

Upon completing the rough cut copy of Deception, we noticed many things we want to change and add to our title sequence. This included the addition of transitions in between our clips, this is because the transition between clips was very jumpy and it did not seem seamless, this meant our title sequence did not appear as professional, therefore I think adding cross dissolves and other transitions would improve our title sequence.
We also have to extend our music throughout our sequence. Our music cut out about half way through the clip so we need to sync our music to our clips properly and extend the music to the end.
We watched another groups video who were also doing a flashback, they showed this by playing their clip and rewinding it in fast motion. We may take up this idea and use it in our own to establish what is past and present more clearly.
We also obviously need to add the titles and credits to our clip, we think we will put these on the gravestones to add to the effect and make the titles more inetresting.
We are also considering putting filters on different scenes to add to the effect and add to the atmosphere.
Other than this we feel our title sequences is clear and makes sense.