You are progressing with some promise Zahra and there is evidence of some proficient research. Please can you read through my comments below regarding the current strengths and less strong aspects of your blog and the complete the to do list at the bottom of the page:
strengths:
- mostly completed tasks for research
- some detail in some posts
less strong:
- multi-posting - you post more than one task on a single posts which is affecting your blog count (you look like you have done less than you have)
- titles for blog posts are not very clear or detailed - just the blog task number isn't clear enough and you could loose marks for communication here
- some research tasks not complete / missing
- reliance on text and screen grabs or hyperlinks to present ideas
to do:
1. give full title name to posts - not just the blog task number
2. go back and separate any posts with more than one task on it
3. begin to think about interesting ways to post your work using ICT
4 make sure any hyperlinks you use work
Based upon my feedback I have separated my blog posts to show the actual amount of work I have done as a lot of my posts were joined together. I have also began renaming my posts, I also used sites such as slideshare as a way of using technology to show my work.
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